Too generalised and lacking specific references to your own experience and to aspects of researched music videos (searched on youTube) and your productions.
Look at Jack Sims (A* response) and Maddie Lamacchia (also A* (both class of 2010-2012)search Blog Archives.
http://maddiea2.blogspot.co.uk/search/label/G324%20Evaluation (class of 2010-2012)012)
For each point you make you need to provide an example of how a specific technology progressed your research (for example when I researched........ and....).
I suggest to strengthen you include specific visual or written references to aspects of how you used media technologies during planning and practice. You need to include clips from your film, and unmanipulated shots contrasted with manipulated shots in your print productions to explain the effect of tools you used on photoshop.
On Panel 5 of your power point you have referenced an excellent example - more of this please.
Very well organised and presented Sam but no visuals at all!!! Hopefully you can revise before posting your final draft. Presently a mainly basic response.
Too generalised and lacking specific references to your own experience and to aspects of researched music videos (searched on youTube) and your productions.
ReplyDeleteLook at Jack Sims (A* response) and Maddie Lamacchia (also A* (both class of 2010-2012)search Blog Archives.
http://maddiea2.blogspot.co.uk/search/label/G324%20Evaluation (class of 2010-2012)012)
For each point you make you need to provide an example of how a specific technology progressed your research (for example when I researched........ and....).
I suggest to strengthen you include specific visual or written references to aspects of how you used media technologies during planning and practice.
You need to include clips from your film, and unmanipulated shots contrasted with manipulated shots in your print productions to explain the effect of tools you used on photoshop.
On Panel 5 of your power point you have referenced an excellent example - more of this please.
Very well organised and presented Sam but no visuals at all!!! Hopefully you can revise before posting your final draft.
Presently a mainly basic response.
Ok, I'll add the improvements asap
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