Slide 1: Your headings are confusing. I don't know what you mean by your headings Planned Differently etc.
Slide 2 Explain exactly what tools you used on Premier Pro and provide examples of edits or other effects. The same with Photoshop. Yu don't have to explain limitations - instead focus on "how you used these technologies in your production.
Slides 3,4 & 5. Too few examples from your own productions. Slide 6 OK
Slide 7: Clicking on titles not working at present.
Also if you used: A memory stick scanner i-phone
I strongly advise you to use the headings in your coursework booklet. This will make your slide show more readable and help improve your marks.
1) Slide 1 - delete because it is not related to the question and thus is confusing.
2) Power Point Construction.
a) More details of using photo shop with examples of images before and after being manipulated. Don't post images off the internet. Post your own images. Your print productions are excellent and more detail is needed to explain how you used photo shop.
b) Delete last slide it is generalised and describing the obvious.
3) Power Point Planning
a) Delete last slide as it's irrelevant.
b) Did you scan story boards or mood board onto your blog, if so then include this in your power point.
4) If you used a memory stick then also include.
Well done for working on this question, just a few more tweaks as advised above.
Slide 1:
ReplyDeleteYour headings are confusing. I don't know what you mean by your headings Planned Differently etc.
Slide 2 Explain exactly what tools you used on Premier Pro and provide examples of edits or other effects. The same with Photoshop. Yu don't have to explain limitations - instead focus on "how you used these technologies in your production.
Slides 3,4 & 5. Too few examples from your own productions.
Slide 6 OK
Slide 7: Clicking on titles not working at present.
Also if you used:
A memory stick
scanner
i-phone
I strongly advise you to use the headings in your coursework booklet. This will make your slide show more readable and help improve your marks.
I've now made improvements for it. The links are all working fine.
ReplyDeleteTo improve:
ReplyDelete1) Slide 1 - delete because it is not related to the question and thus is confusing.
2) Power Point Construction.
a) More details of using photo shop with examples of images before and after being manipulated. Don't post images off the internet. Post your own images. Your print productions are excellent and more detail is needed to explain how you used photo shop.
b) Delete last slide it is generalised and describing the obvious.
3) Power Point Planning
a) Delete last slide as it's irrelevant.
b) Did you scan story boards or mood board onto your blog, if so then include this in your power point.
4) If you used a memory stick then also include.
Well done for working on this question, just a few more tweaks as advised above.
ok, but which last slide do you mean? The evaluation?
Delete