A vast improvement from your earlier draft. Well organised and you focus on the question with appropriate examples. There is also strong evidence of research.
One small revision:
You need to say at the beginning of your section on the digipak that you USED the convention of the 4 panel package.
A vast improvement from your earlier draft. Well organised and you focus on the question with appropriate examples. There is also strong evidence of research.
ReplyDeleteOne small revision:
You need to say at the beginning of your section on the digipak that you USED the convention of the 4 panel package.
Well done Sam.